IELTS Writing Task 2 #205

Linking expressions

In Task 2 of the Academic Writing exam, you need to support the opinion you express by providing examples. You can use these phrases:

to introduce an example

  • for example
  • for instance
  • including
  • for one thing
  • another example of this is

to introduce an additional point

  • also
  • furthermore
  • in addition to this
  • moreover

to describe a cause

  • (another) reason (for this) is
  • because (of/due to)

to describe a result

  • the result of this is
  • this leads to
  • consequently
  • as a result
  • this means that

Related topic: Academic Task 2 Language Bank

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Model answer

The last hundred years have seen rapid and dramatic developments in many areas, including medicine, transport, manufacturing and communications. Over that period our lives have changed in ways that our parents and grandparents could only have dreamed of, but the question we should ask is whether the world is a better place to live in as a result.

There have clearly been many benefits. Advances in medical science have brought cures for once fatal diseases and this has significantly extended the lifespan we can expect. Information technology has allowed us to contact friends or colleagues worldwide at the click of a mouse. We can now gather information, manage our bank account or shop without having to step outside our home. In addition, labour-saving devices such as washing machines and microwave ovens have made everyday tasks much easier.

However, the fact that life has improved in so many ways doesn't mean that all the developments have been positive. For example, the emphasis on acquiring the latest technology has made people increasingly materialistic. We also tend to lead more isolated lives than our parents did, with less concern for other people. The resulting breakdown of traditional social ties can leave the elderly and other vulnerable people without the support they need. Among other serious problems we face are the drug culture, and the ever-present threat of terrorism.

To sum up, we have made great progress over the last hundred years but there are still many important issues to tackle. This may well be a better time to live than any previous age but hopefully the future will be better still.

(268 words)